|Challenge part 1 of 2
||[Nov. 17th, 2004|12:34 pm]
101 Nights of Multifandom Porn
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Pairing: Gil Grissom/Warrick Brown/ Greg Sanders
Warnings: triad/threesome, mild kink (bondage and mild Dominance/submission), angst, and sap, NC-17
Author's Notes: The challenge:Slow penetration and teasing. One of your pairing sliding in inch by inch, sliding out as soon as the bottom gets a good feel. Maybe he's playfully punishing his lover, maybe he wants to slow things down, maybe he's missed being inside (no time for long prolonged love-making due to work). But I want begging and pleading and low murmurs and frustration and a sense of longing.
The comments: A BIG thank you to Roulette and Psilence for the beta and Moonled and Tinnean for the editing! Without them, this would have been a VERY different (and poorer) fic. And I hope y'all feel it met the challenge requirements for teasing.
Disclaimer:I do not own the characters and mean no disrespect/copy right infringement through this story. I have made no money from this fic and am poor. please don't sue.
Longing - part 1 of 2
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continued in part 2